I made this one kinda fast, sorry if its not that great.
oh oh at long last i'm a real girly now and you know what i just don't ever really want to go back to being a silly boy this is just so much better!
I love it I really love the twist at the end
it was short but intresting thoughts count so great
Well that was short
Just like that?! Come'on. Unless the guy was so in love with becoming a woman, you'd think that loosing a bet would be a little more dramatic. Also, there are better ways to craft first-person perspective in stories without the repetitive usages of "I" at the beginning of nearly every sentence. I might have an example or two in my gallery(although I'm a mostly third-person writter), I could direct you to some decent examples of first-person tg if you're interested.
*, but I could direct you...*