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A mile in her bra episode 2: 12:00 (tg caption) by lilythegreat00 A mile in her bra episode 2: 12:00 (tg caption) by lilythegreat00
I made this one kinda fast, sorry if its not that great.
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eleventhdr Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
oh oh at long last i'm a real girly now  and you know what i just don't ever really want to go back to being a silly boy this is just so much better!
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Jeff--hardy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Artist
I love it I really love the twist at the end
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sallyane Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
love this
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sallyane Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
it was short but intresting thoughts count so great
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gumballkitty Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Well that was short
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JanusDaGuardian42 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just like that?! Come'on. Unless the guy was so in love with becoming a woman, you'd think that loosing a bet would be a little more dramatic. Also, there are better ways to craft first-person perspective in stories without the repetitive usages of "I" at the beginning of nearly every sentence. I might have an example or two in my gallery(although I'm a mostly third-person writter), I could direct you to some decent examples of first-person tg if you're interested.
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JanusDaGuardian42 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*, but I could direct you...*
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lilythegreat00 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
I did this one late last night so i'd saw it may be my worst (except my 1st) story wise. My other ones are much better.
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necasnow Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
nice story!
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